i finished the fourt chapther of my fanfic "nukumizu war diary"

for this one i decided to try to make it more easy to read because one of my friend said tha the frist tree chapther are realy hard to read because the text is litery attached to each other

if you want to gived a try and give me your opinion i will be very happy to hear it
and if you have question i will be happy to answer theam