I can’t tell if this fisheye drawing actually makes sense or not

Hey ArtAdvice, I recently decided I wanted to really test my drawing skills with a 5 point perspective action scene. I think I harshly overestimated my abilities as I’ve never used any vanishing points before or even done an entire scene. This is my progress so far, I think there are some issues with it (mostly in the cars) but I have no idea what they are (or even if there are any). I would love to know if there are any glaring issues that need to be fixed before I get busy with colour and detail. Any tips on drawing objects which don’t nicely line up with the vanishing points like the car on the left would be greatly appreciated as well. Also please don’t rip into it too hard, I’m pretty proud of it so far but I probably deserve a beating for not bothering to learn perspective the normal way. Thanks heaps in advance